@emily_s @kboyd ! mine also overflows its viewbox, i wonder if mine will look bad in your renderer too!
here's my versions:
https://tilde.town/~pho4cexa/pridebanner.tmp.html
(once i get haproxy set up the way i want on my personal domain i'll make the page better and edit my original post)
(edit: updated this page with more verbiage)