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  • May 20, 2026, 10:40 PM

    this is part of a 147-line "poematic.txt" (including empty spacer lines) I wrote once, on-disk timestamps dating creation to 2023-07, and modification to 2024-08

    the bracketed parts not part of original
    it was very rambling, and extremely lamenting
    some parts of it are bad, some are alright, some are good, a few lines more personal, most lines rather general
    there's actually even a couple segments separated with "------" lines, even, but I forget if they were added as I made it longer (and worse) over time, or if I added them afterwards, trying to delimit the different themes to own sections, idk

    the very last section is but one verse long, silly capstone, nothing more than
    ------
    there's so much I should do
    and so much I could do too
    and so little I do do
    do do do-do-do dooo
    ------

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  • May 20, 2026, 10:57 PM

    oh and the "long-gone poet" wasn't intended as such, but, actually fits decently well...huh...
    the person who wrote it has, indeed, long gone to the void, replaced with someone else
    now that I think of it, it kind of is a farewell letter huh
    lol

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